Color project grade proposal

I think my project deserved a B+ because not only did it meet the parameters, it extended them.

The frame and the piece were not separate entities, but one. The frame complimented the piece both structurally and color-wise, as well as the piece did with the frame.

The only down size of the set was that the pieces didn't come out as well as I would've hoped, which is why I can only ask for a B+.

2D Story line Critique.

I decided to critique my own, considering I was absent the day we had a critique.
My story is about a very frequent reacurring dream. I found it very amusing when I heard that the theme was crossing the line, as the theme of my dream is that me and my friend Josh always fight these zombies at night who cross this line that I drew in the sand on this beach in Corpus Cristi. I WISH that I had made that up. Before school started, we had taken a trip to Corpus with a couple of friends and went to a beach at night time. We played in the water and sand, and I thought that I saw a man walk from the ocean to the beach in swimming trunks. He was all strung out or drunk because he was falling all over him self like he was sick from being drunk or something. Then I totally thought of the scariest horror monster in my opinion: Zombies.
And whats scarier then them coming from the freaken ocean? Nothing. Soo ever since then there has been a beach zombie movie playing in my dreams pretty frequently since then. You can call bullshit, but I swear its true.  I think that the fact that I used a comic book style to portray my story added the line theme because about seventy percent of the panels, action sequences, and story incorperates lines.  The strongest princeples used in  the story are rhythm and movement. The way the story and visuals flow and such a nice rhythm that make it effortless to move through the panels at the rhythmatic pace that is brought on about by text placement and motion lines and angles. The value reallys brings out the sorta cheesey fast pace action of an old school zombie film, as well as the darkness that shows off the contrast in the always present over the top gore of old scary movies.
The thing that I find lacking in the story is more narrative aspects.  I plan on revising this by adding more text and length to  the comic.

ind. white space photos

These are all done with my webcam. I just tried to think negative space really.

My "Someone Crossed the Line" Story 2D WASH

Here's my sort of movie poster for my comic strip I'm doing for the story. Sorry it was alittle late, the internet doesn't work in my dorm and I had to go to the doctor today so I'm just getting back to the WASH building from Conroe. Enjoy. Its about me and my friend fighting zombies, and they crossed the line. I used photoshop paint for the poster.

2D Wash 2010 Accordion books.

So I made my accordion book, and of course, its not too great. I stay up most of the night to finish an already 1 and a half week project, and I get straight ones again. I'm sorry that I suck at working with stupid cardboard. I'm going to super work on my found object sculpture for days. It'll be boss.

2D Wash 2011 Rhythm and Repetition Photos

I took some photos for the shoot. Haa!!

This is my dorm in perspective

 This is one of my first paintings. And it was acrylic.

My towel and my shirt hanging with plenty of folds.

2D Wash 2011 Dots: In Real Life

 This one is oil spot on the ground, and it shows some continence.

 This is a mosaic type pattern outside my drawing class. This demonstrates similarity well.

This has some street lights at night that show proximity.

 Another proximity street light at night photo.

 The key pad to get into the restroom at Walgreens. Great similarity.

 This one just glows with some continuance.

Most of these where of me taking pictures of street lights while driving lol. Also had a lot of similarity and continuance. Like always.
I liked this assignment. I enjoy photography.
Although it isn't my strongest craft, I do like to put down the pencil sometimes.

2D Wash 2011 Dot Transformation: Magnetic and Contour Maps

 I used my eraser to sketch extra magnetic lines to add more rhythm.

 I wanted to express polarity in this contour map.

 This was probably my favorite contour map.

 This was the first magnetic one I did.

I liked the yellow. And the way it was cut too. lol